After- Chapter 2

SO THE FIRST CHAPTER WAS PRETTY WELL RECIEVED ON FF.NET SO I WORKED ON IT SOME MORE. Yuri actually.... isn't in this chapter. Raven is, but not till the second half. INSTEAD WE HAVE KAROL AND JUDITH. I was going to switch over back to Yuri for the second half of the chapter but the bit with Karol ended up longer than I anticipated. SO YEAH. Also the first chapter is here, since I don't think I posted it here.

( No matter how used to it I am, Karol is still a strange name for a BOY )